Tuesday, March 12, 2013

27_An Excerpt

The other week, I read at the Seltzer Zine's monthly reading series, hosted by Midtown Barbecue and Brew.  (Still the Yachtclub in my mind).  The first time I read with them, I forgot that you're only supposed to read for a few minutes and got politely cut off.  So, this time around, I decided to read something much shorter, much more to the point.  The following excerpt is an even longer version of what I read, reflecting on the progress I've made since.  For now, the piece is untitled, but divided into three parts, which explains the ridiculous title you see immediately below:

Part 2 (So Far)

Overcome by the crushing desire to escape the clutter and wreck of another wasted day, Bond asks Pratt to wake her up early on his way to work. He nudges her awake on his way out of the shower, water dripping on to her shoulder from his hair. She rubs the drops in to her skin and pulls the sheets around her as she stands. Pratt leads the way into the kitchen where the smell of breakfast cooking reminds Bond that this is the way that things begin. She falls into a chair at the kitchen table and smiles as she refuses a plate of bacon and eggs. It is enough for her to be awake with the entire day in front of her, marveling at the strange way that morning light is discernible from that of the afternoon. She looks away from the small kitchen window to Pratt. They lock eyes over their coffee mugs. For all the tenderness of Pratt's smile, the messy comfort of his hair and the stubble on his chin, all that Bond can see inside his eyes are closed doors. He finishes his coffee, dumps the breakfast plates in the sink, kisses Bond on the cheek and leaves.

Bond listens for the door to close and then walks into the unused second bedroom. She turns the blinds until the room is filled with the soft mid-March morning light. She drops the sheet to her ankles and crosses her arms in front of her breasts. She walks into the bedroom, removes the full-length mirror from its hook and places it against a wall in the empty room. There, naked in the prospect of another day, she feels like the skin she sees in the mirror is not a reflection of her, but rather a simple portrait of a blank canvass, waiting to be filled in. It is a study of plainness; that smoothness of clear skin she left behind with Eastern.

Now image upon image floods through her head. She sees dancing skeletons and vibrant flowers. She sees bold oceans and brilliant skies. Tigers bare their teeth at her. She smiles to herself at them. Vivid as they are, none of them seem real.

Finally she remembers the looming darkness of the windows in Eastern's office, looking out on nothing but a tangled wall of vegetation separating them from a darker unknown. She sees herself in the rooms of his house as a bird caged, always looking up and out at a world so much larger than herself, forbidden to enter in to it for fear of being swallowed by it. An image comes to her mind that finally feels solid.

Looking at her figure, its emptiness filled only by the pale freckles beneath her eyes, a mole on her
ribcage and the soft shadows where her limbs curve around themselves, she knows how she will start her day. She wants her body to feel real, without only her shadow to prove to the sun that it is.

She showers and dresses hurriedly and steps out into the warm, damp morning. Her feet, energetic, excited and over-caffeinated, carry her towards the waterfront. Only blocks away from Pratt's apartment, close to the harbor, sits a green-roofed tattoo parlor.

Bond steps inside and breathes deep, taking in for the first time the heady, anti-septic smell of soap and balm hiding raw skin and blood. There is the subtle static of loud music turned down low and the steady chatter of the needles in the background, like the voices of old friends whispering secrets to each other behind drawn curtains.

Behind the counter, a bearded man with his hands held in front of himself watches her.

I need a tattoo,” she says.

You're in the right place. I'm Reed. Do you know what you want or have a picture of anything you'd like?”

I just escaped from something. So I would like something to reflect that.”

How about a bird in flight?”

How about an empty cage?”

Interesting,” Reed says, picking up a pencil and a piece of paper, “You're not focused on the entrapped escaping, but rather the jail that is left behind.” He starts to draw and does not see the blush on Bond's face bring out the green of her eyes. She is silent, unsure of how to voice her approval. He asks her where she wants it and she points to her shoulder blade. He turns her around to measure a piece of paper on her back.

Sorry,” he tells her, “I like to analyze people's tattoos too much sometimes. Most people ignore me, but it bothers some.”

I don't mind at all,” Bond says, knowing for certain that she is in the right place.

As Reed draws the transfer sketch, Bond asks her questions, feeling foolish in her excitement, like a schoolgirl again. Reed answers patiently, if a little bored, the way that people get when they have to explain the most basic aspects of a skill they've mastered.

It's OK if you're nervous,” Reed says, now sitting in his booth, pulling on rubber gloves and removing the needles from their packaging. “You're about to permanently alter your skin. If you weren't nervous about that, I'd say you weren't thinking about it hard enough.”

Bond considers this, takes a deep breath and steels herself, determined not to let herself down. She takes off her shirt, pulls her bra strap down and sits with her back to Reed. As the needle vibrates to life, she looks to her side to the mirror hanging on the wall of Reed's booth, but she cannot see him fully. She only sees his hands and the tattoo gun lowering towards her.

As the tattoo gun chatters into Bond's skin, she tells him the beginnings of her story, her words chopped up into quick phrases, the pressure of the line work acting as punctuation.

His name is Eastern,” she says, her face twisting into the sneer reserved for parents, teachers or lovers who do not understand. Reed, concentrating, does not ask which he is.

This is the whole reason I finally left,” Bond says, nodding to where Reed is busy with the bird cage, “and the first one I get is about him. I think that's funny, I guess.”

As Reed finishes and cleans her shoulder blade, Bond comforts herself against the pain. The raw, burning feeling, she tells herself, means that that part of her body, at least, is very real.

* * *

When Pratt comes home, he finds Bond washing the tattoo in the bathroom mirror, rubbing balm over the swollen, shining picture. She catches his eyes in the mirror and to her he has the same expression as a schoolboy seeing a woman naked for the first time. His surprise and arousal are clear, as is his complete confusion. Before she can explain, he walks to the sink and washes his hands.

Taking the tube of balm from Bond's hands, he says “Let me help,” and covers the rest of her tattoo where her hands cannot reach, a smile growing on his face. She leans her head on his chest and in a minute they are both laughing loud at themselves, his arms around her, the bathroom steaming from the hot tap water that Pratt left running.

How much did that cost?” Pratt asks, the laughter fading in to faint echos on the bathroom tile. Bond tells him and he nods, not quite frowning, but not far from it.

Bond begins to apologize but Pratt cuts her off. “It's OK. You had to do it. I know.”

She takes his hand and leads him to the bedroom, pushing him down and pulling off his clothes. As they tangle themselves in the sheets, Bond feels concentrated and focused. For the first time in so long, there is nothing on her mind except for him. Even when his eager hands scratch at her back and rake across the edge of her shoulder, her cry turns in to a laugh and she immediately forgives him. Afterward, panting and satisfied, she feels delightfully exhausted. She rolls over on her side and pulls his arm around her as she drifts off to sleep. In the darkness, her shoulder smolders like the ember of a fire left to burn out in the night.

* * *


The next morning, Pratt does something beautiful. He wakes Bond up early and holds a ballpoint pen to her face. Groggy and confused, she does not understand until he takes her arm and starts to draw on it. She laughs herself awake as he draws stick figures, cartoon skulls, leaky pirate ships and horizons that fall off the edge of the world.

Whatever you want, just ask me,” Pratt says.

They shower together and as the ink runs off of Bond's arm to wash over the both of them, Bond feels like she is losing something.

Now it's all gone,” she says, watching the dark water wash down the sink.

I can do it again. Any time you want. Just let me know. Whatever you want, I'll give it to you,” Pratt tells her, kissing her on the lips.

There in the shower, Bond wants to tell him that she does not want something replaceable. Without the money or means to make her point, she decides to let it wash down the drain. She kisses him back. Pressing herself in to Pratt as close as she can, she still feels a loneliness expanding inside of her, like a door previously locked shut yawning open.

* * *


Eastern turns the page. The next drawing is a rough sketch of two dragons, their faces snarling clumsily at each other, their tails tangled, merging together at the bottom of the page. The dragons' wings curl above their heads, framing the words “Fear is the heart of love”. Vague framing lines and smudged finger and hand prints surround the sketch. In one corner, a faint ring of red wine cuts across the page.

You didn't draw this,” Eastern says.

No. Bond did.”

Allow me to explain,” says the voice from beyond the Locked Door. Reed nods and motions to turn the page. In a flurry of bright colors, the image explodes.

* * *

Like the tails of terrible dragons in love, days and nights intertwine until they become one. While Pratt works downtown designing party posters and event fliers for failing local bands, Bond spends her days walking through the city, handing out a feeble one page resume, hoping that the hiring managers and head bar tenders she speaks to don't notice the desperation in her eyes. At home, eating cold leftovers, she continuously checks her finances – a dwindling checking account and a stagnant mutual fund that she tries not to touch.

The birdcage on her shoulder has long since stopped burning. Instead, a new pain has settled in. Every time Bond catches a glimpse of it in the mirror or runs her fingers over the subtly raised lines of ink, she feels a deep sadness that she cannot add to it. Without accompaniment, it almost seems like it was a mistake. Checking the brightness of the computer screen again, the numbers still fail to add up.

Some days Pratt comes home to find Bond sitting in the empty second room covered only in a bed sheet. At first Bond tries to plead her case to Pratt, but after a few fruitless weeks, a heavy silence of words already said falls over those nights. As spring warms to summer, the city noise from the open windows covers the shuddering sound of Bond's breathing and the whispered platitudes that Pratt offers.

Invariably, the next morning, Pratt will wake Bond up with a collection of colored markers and ask what she wants. With her head to one side, she hold her arms out, wrists up, smiles sweetly and lies.

Sitting in the shade of a cafe umbrella by the monument, ordering nothing more than a coffee, Bond catches sight of Reed walking down the opposite side of the street. Expecting nothing, she calls to him and is pleasantly surprised when he changes course to join her. Asking about her life, Reed invites a torrent of rants and complaints from Bond. Midway through a rushing sentence, Reed raises his hand to stop Bond and hails a cab.

You need a drink,” he tells her.

Unable to stop herself, Bond continues her story in the cab, as unsure of how clearly Reed is paying attention as she is unsure of who needs to hear the words more. Reed smiles and nods.

On the other side of the harbor, Reed ushers Bond into a dark slouch of a bar. Reed calls the bar tender, a foreigner named Thames, and introduces him as the owner. Over their first round, Reed and Thames talk and laugh and tell tales while Bond sits quietly, feeling empty after her rant.

Pouring another round, Thames turns to Bond and begins to ask her about beer and wine, her taste in music. Understanding the test, Bond answers honestly even though she is terrified that her lack of knowledge will disqualify her from salvation. Thames tells bond to come behind the bar and begins to show her the layout. He takes her on a tour of the two floor establishment and explains that he needs a bar tender for the upstairs on the weekends. Bond says “yes” too fast and they both laugh. Thames hands her a worn, dogeared cocktail book and tells her to memorize the bookmarked items.

On her way home, after another round on Reed, Bond spends the last of her cash on a notebook and a box of pens. She overdrafts her checking account buying a bottle of champagne which she opens as soon as she is in the door of her apartment, not caring about the foam that spills over her hands, nor bothering with a glass. When Pratt comes home, she is sitting at the kitchen table with the bottle of champagne copying and recopying cocktail recipes out of Thames' book. She turns to him, her green eyes glowing and blurts out her news on the way to kiss him hard on the lips.

The following Thursday, Bond is thankful even to a God she left behind with Eastern to have a job to go to. On that hazy afternoon, the heat, the snarl of traffic and the crush of city life wakes her out of the week and a half of numb sleeping, pacing and eating beans out of a can while she waits. Finally, here are two days of the week that Bond can join society and escape the horrors of daytime television.

Those few hours behind the bar make the difficult, penny-pinching life after Eastern – every numb and nail-biting moment – worth it. At the end of her first shift, when Thames hands her $175 tightly wadded and shrugs saying that it was an OK night, Bond is grateful that he turns his back quickly. It seems like all the money in the world.

A few dollars, a few shifts more and the tattoo on her shoulder stops bothering her. When she sees it, it seems to yield to her, letting her know that yes, it is lonely, but in time, it will not be. No longer is her empty skin a burden, but a yawning canvas inviting the inevitable paint. The images in her head are an eventuality, not a fantasy. On those nights that Bond sleeps alone, that thought folds itself around her in comfort.

- Kid

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